{"id":91,"date":"2011-06-07T19:51:19","date_gmt":"2011-06-07T17:51:19","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/?p=91"},"modified":"2011-06-14T18:13:29","modified_gmt":"2011-06-14T16:13:29","slug":"something-to-cut-out","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/something-to-cut-out","title":{"rendered":"Something to cut out&#8230;"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I like to look at esoteric aspects of language and sometimes be flippant with tongue-in-cheek\u00a0musings \u2013\u00a0as\u00a0per my previous posts.\u00a0But today, let\u2019s be practical.<\/p>\n<p>In George Orwell\u2019s 1946 essay \u201cPolitics and the English Language\u201d, he listed five rules for effective writing. Here\u2019s one of them (about which I have to constantly remind myself)\u00a0on superfluity in language:<\/p>\n<p><strong>If it\u2019s possible to cut a word out, always cut it out. <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>When\u00a0writing, less is always more. Express the essence. Say it, don&#8217;t spray it.\u00a0\u00a0Communicate crisply. For example:<\/p>\n<p>It\u2019s a clear indication = It\u2019s clear; On a daily basis = daily; The old classics = The classics; They merged together \/ as one = They merged. (You will have recognised that most of these are tautologies \/ redundant repetitions.)<\/p>\n<p>Thomas Jefferson stated the rule succinctly over 200 years ago, <em>\u201cThe most valuable of all talents is that of never using two words when one will do.\u201d <\/em>But my favourite quote on the subject is\u00a0from Dr Seuss, <em>\u201cSo the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p>The only positive thing about verbosity \u2013\u00a0and it&#8217;s\u00a0scant consolation however \u2013\u00a0is that it keeps us editors in business. But I&#8217;d prefer a world without editors.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I like to look at esoteric aspects of language and sometimes be flippant with tongue-in-cheek\u00a0musings \u2013\u00a0as\u00a0per my previous posts.\u00a0But today, let\u2019s be practical. In George Orwell\u2019s 1946 essay \u201cPolitics and the English Language\u201d, he listed five rules for effective writing. &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/something-to-cut-out\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[6,7],"tags":[17,16,18],"class_list":["post-91","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-language-use","category-words-2","tag-crisp-communication","tag-effective-writing","tag-orwell"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/91","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=91"}],"version-history":[{"count":5,"href":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/91\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":115,"href":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/91\/revisions\/115"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=91"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=91"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/gavinford.com\/thinkspot\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=91"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}